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tlintx · April 30, 2013

Can you fade the background a bit more? At least on screen, it's a bit hard to separate from the text.

There's no space between the colon and dollar sign on the first picture.

Are you selling seeds? Plants? How many seeds per packet?

I had to go back to read the bulk text; it was a bit overwhelming. Is your target audience market goers or commercial? If the former, are they people like me, with a few plants, or farmers?

My gut feeling is there's too much information for your average user and too much basic info for your pro.

I think it really depends on your target audience, though.

I like the second one, kind of like a wine shelf talker. Those always get my attention.

talkers

Edit: I think plants? I would ditch the seed sowing info, maybe replace with a short line about how OP varieties allow you to save seed. Also, the bugs and pesticides stuff might be a bit too much.

Just my thoughts as a consumer, please ignore if they aren't helpful to you!

Tl

April 30, 2013	#2
tlintx Tomatovillian™ Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: SeTx Posts: 881	Can you fade the background a bit more? At least on screen, it's a bit hard to separate from the text. There's no space between the colon and dollar sign on the first picture. Are you selling seeds? Plants? How many seeds per packet? I had to go back to read the bulk text; it was a bit overwhelming. Is your target audience market goers or commercial? If the former, are they people like me, with a few plants, or farmers? My gut feeling is there's too much information for your average user and too much basic info for your pro. I think it really depends on your target audience, though. I like the second one, kind of like a wine shelf talker. Those always get my attention. talkers Edit: I think plants? I would ditch the seed sowing info, maybe replace with a short line about how OP varieties allow you to save seed. Also, the bugs and pesticides stuff might be a bit too much. Just my thoughts as a consumer, please ignore if they aren't helpful to you! Tl Last edited by tlintx; April 30, 2013 at 10:09 PM.